#1 has some good things going for in in terms of balancing the light and the negative space. It's got good leading lines that terminate in a focal point. Excluding the ceiling was an excellent choice. This is very pleasant image to look at.
Thanks glad you like it!
#2 Including the ceiling takes the mystique away from the image (that same mystique that's there in #1). By including the overhead lights, it looks underexposed esp re: the dangling light fixture. Where it blows out, you can see some pretty heavy chromatic aberration (purple halos around the lights).
Yeah, I totally know what you mean here. The ceiling ruined that one, haha
The others don't do anything for me. Good experiments with DOF but they're under-exposed with a fairly narrow tonal range. (The latter would likely be mostly eliminated by a proper exposure.)
What do you mean by tonal range? Never heard of that before.
FWIW, I keep scrolling down while writing this to sneak looks at #1 over and over again. I really like it.
Haha