some shots from work, c & c please

[hawk232]

the adult:

the juveniles:

the adult making his place in the hierarchy obvious:

 

[Robin Usagani]

#1. I would put the shoreline at the 1/3 from the top. Just crop the sky because the sky doesnt look that good. Make it a wider crop ratio

#2 I like it

#3 and #4 too much cyan and magenta. I can see a lot of Chromatic Aberation on the edges.

 

[hawk232]

thanks!! will crop shortly! then ill work on figuring out how to adjust the cyan and magenta, then i will look up what chromatic abberation is. Is that something I can fix pp?

 

[Undo]

Very nice shots! #3 is especially nice.

 

[Frequency]

Generally i liked all of them; but except #2, i feel the bird is not in sharp focus and shadows crept in; to be frank, i really loved the blue-grounds, probably because i am a fanatic blue lover

Regards

 

[Robin Usagani]

 

[bazooka]

I think the colors are over-saturated on #1.

 

[hawk232]

thanks schwetty, you were right, much better!!

as for the cyan and magenta i didnt have much luck figuring out how to alter those... at least not in paint.net

i looked up the chromatic abberation and even with examples my eyes just must not be trained enough. I looked at several before and after photos and, try as i might, i could tell no difference!!

 

[EricD]

NIce captures on all....but them seem quite blue on my screen. A bit of colorcast i would say.