storm rolling in

[bs0604]

 

[Majeed Badizadegan]

The blues feel too pushed for me in the sky. You've got bright cyan spots in the trees that don't look right-- artifacting of HDR or selective editing. The grass looks nice. A little flat and there's a spot of light around the house that doesn't look quite right. I'd consider trying to pull a bit more detail out of the grass with some local contrast (at least the area with wildflowers in front of the abandoned structure).

I really enjoy the subect and composition. I would consider a BW conversion or a re-work from square one. The processing misses for me.

 

[bs0604]

Thanks for the feedback. The sky is heavily edited in Nik Software and I did heighten the blues, perhaps too much. I like your idea of BW and will try that.

 

[Majeed Badizadegan]

Thanks for the feedback. The sky is heavily edited in Nik Software and I did heighten the blues, perhaps too much. I like your idea of BW and will try that.

You're welcome. Post the re-work here!