Structure lines.

[ronlane]

This is a close up of a structure in downtown OKC.



2-7 photowalk-41-Edit.jpg by Lane Photo | Ron Lane, on Flickr

 

[W.Y.Photo]

I'm not a big fan of the upper right corner. I'd consider doing a burn to darken it and make it less noticeable. Otherwise this is a pretty striking image. The lines and tonality are very pleasing to the eye.

 

[KenC]

I agree with the above. My first instinct was to crop it, but this may be a better option.

 

[ronlane]

Thanks for the suggestion. I will try that.

 

[Braineack]

I like it as is. if it were lightened, it would be boring and not have depth to the frame.

 

[W.Y.Photo]

I like it as is. if it were lightened, it would be boring and not have depth to the frame.

I just mean the little area in the top right with the windows or whatever they are..

 

[ronlane]

@W.Y.Photo, I understand what you are saying, just that building windows in the background. I think you are correct to use the brush to that area and not add a vignetting to the whole thing.

@Braineack thanks.

 

[Benjo255]

I like it as is. if it were lightened, it would be boring and not have depth to the frame.

I think the same. The windows behind contestualize it and makes me understand this is part of something in front of a building.
Without it...uhm...I think they're a nice texture, but not strong enough.

 

[kdthomas]

I'm gonna go with losing the upper right corner. Love the lines, very nice.

 

[ronlane]

I like the burn the corner. It's still there to give the information but is dark to not draw your attention.

Changes are reflected on the original post.

 

[W.Y.Photo]

I like it!!