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proberok

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$IMG_6366.webp
 
Too dark, not enough details in the shadows. I'd rather see their face and not the back.
 
I like this. The Exit sign just beyond his/her head is a bit busy - there's better separation in the larger version, though I personally would still have cloned out the neon lines and kept just the Exit part and arrow. I think that would also make the colors a bit more harmonious in the overall shot.
 
I like the idea of this shot, even shot from the back.

This sign IS slightly distracting, but what distracted me most was whatever is coming up to his/her backside (railings? Looks like wood?)

I would try to take out any element the viewer cannot immediately identify, esp in the foreground - personally of course.
 
he's in front of the wood seats. i never saw his face. that probably would have ruined it for me. his hair and guitar is all that matters.
 
Yes, probably limr is right. Here is some rough neon lights cloning and a bit of exposure boost.

$IMG_6366.webp
 
he's in front of the wood seats. i never saw his face. that probably would have ruined it for me. his hair and guitar is all that matters.

I think I would remove the seats too. Just saw the edit sash did...that with no wood seats would make for an excellent shot.
 

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