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[303villain]

Intent- kinda obvious from the title
f4.9 @ 1sec. on my lil r707, 24mm focal length, 100 iso.
The only thing i really did in ps was to slightly adjust the levels, and the duotone.

just want to see if the composition, and adjustments and everything as far as capturing the right mood, trying to make it look like she was daydreaming, cause i really have NO idea what really was on her mind!

 

[Neophyte Photographer]

I like the colors you have here. Bold subject colors and soft background colors.

PERSONAL OPINION
If i was printing this i would crop some of the pier/boardwalk off the bottom...it just doesn't seem to be working for me

 

[303villain]

ok cool, thanks! ill look into that, im not really printing this, just for fun, but ill do it anyway!

 

[Karalee]

I feel like your subject is too central. I would have had the left side of the frame end in between those 2 posts, and more empty space on the right side of the frame. It tends to give the viewer the illusion that you can see more of what shes seeing when you really cant. This has a lot of potential imo, if you were to reshoot it you may nail it!

 

[303villain]

cool, thanks! ive got several shots of this image, so its quite possible that ive got it, ill have a look through them again!