Sunrise - C&C Always Welcome

[ceeboy14]

 

[intwophoto]

I really like what you've got here... a couple compositional critiques:

- there is a small blade tip of grass peering into the left side of the frame, it's a tad distracting as my eye goes right to it

- i think you could have either backed up a few inches or zoomed back ( if you were using a zoom ) a couple mm's. Both on the top and right side there are singular grass blades cut off. Think of things like this as you would hands or feet on portraits.

- the grass blade that hangs over the sun ; 10x better if that blade didn't actually touch the sun.

Overall though, it's a beautiful shot. I love the ambience and ( for me ) the exposure over the whole image is well executed.

 

[hamlet]

You can buff that out or take it again in the morning.