Sunset shoot with model

[ndancona]

Would appreciate some C&C on these to help with my learning curve.

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[FKP007]

1. Has too much of an off camera Flash over powering the sun look, her skin tone is too pink and doesn't match the ambient temp.

2. Solid love it.

3. Better than number 1 prefer this one.

4. Nice framing and comp

5. Not a fan of the horizon coming out of her face , a better crop and angle would be my suggestion.

6. Nice pose.


Overall good work man.

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[ndancona]

Thanks for the feedback. I agree with your comment on 1. I should have gelled my flash but was juggling with a lot of stuff on my own in the wind.
With 2. and 5. the horizon was my biggest issue. With 2. I was aware when shooting that the horizon was cutting her head and I tried shooting from lower and higher, I even lay on the floor. However, this was the best angle. The other angles just didn't do it for me. Give and take I guess!