SWAN5

[SUNR15E]

swan5 by SUNR15E, on Flickr

I told him to wash his neck before he turned up for the Photo shoot....did he listen????

SUNR15E

 

[MLeeK]

Too much blown out white on the back. Draws your eye right in to it. The composition isn't so hot either. Perhaps cropping it down to just the neck and head so the dynamic line of the neck leads you through the image.