Teen girl, abandoned city

[Pomo]

I'm glad to say, this photo won photo of the month:
March 2020 Photo of the Month

Thanks for your voting, guys!

 

[The_Traveler]

Quite a lovely shot.
IMO, her shoes draw too much attention and there is too much empty non-contributing space at the top and her feet are very close to the margin.
Yes, I realize her head is at the thirds but that's not a firm rule, imo.)
If she is moved up in the frame, more added at the bottom and a slight vignette added, several things happen.
Besides that she isn't standing on the bottom margin, the corners are closed off and that jagged window glass actually accentuates her face.

 

[enezdez]

@Pomo Nice Shot!

 

[Pomo]

Nice Shot!

Thank you!

 

[The_Traveler]

@Pomo,

You didn't mention my comment.
Does that mean that it's a waste of time to be critical of your postings?

 

[Pomo]

You didn't mention my comment.
Does that mean that it's a waste of time to be critical of your postings?

Hello The_Traveler. Thank you for the feedback.
I like your variant, but decided to leave more space around the girl.