The Breakup.

[ellery]

 

[Derrel]

Yes!!!!!!!!!!

 

[amolitor]

Nice storytelling, some powerful images.

Well done!

 

[Derrel]

I meant, "No! No! No! Sweetie, please, NO!!!!"

 

[Buckster]

Well done!!

 

[pgriz]

Evocative. Well done.

 

[charlie76]

LOL at that last shot, man!!

 

[The_Traveler]

Nicely done.
I especially like the keys off to the side.
Two quibbles.
I wouldn't include the wilted flower - way too obvious
I would make the last one much darker to fit the mood.

 

[ellery]

Nicely done.
I especially like the keys off to the side.
Two quibbles.
I wouldn't include the wilted flower - way too obvious
I would make the last one much darker to fit the mood.

Thanks everyone for the feedback. That was my first post in the forum, and I'm blown away by your responsiveness.

@Traveler, I agree that the darker version of the last photo fits the theme a bit better. The original thought was around "it's a new day", but I can see how a darker version complements the rest.

As for the flower, I agree with you as well. It makes it feel as if I'm trying too hard to get my point across. I included that photo because a) I really like it b) It's contextually relevant

Thanks again for the feeback!

Ellery.