That's really cool actually. I like it as it is, or possibly I'd like to see a very small crop to lose some of the pure black from the LHS of the shot?
I agree - that is a striking composition. :thumbup: All I can say is I want it to be sharper. When you're shooting something so full of texture, like the grain of wood here, take it slow and use a tripod to make sure you can capture it. Can you try it again?