The Leaf

[andymac1981]

Hi All

Just posting my 1st pic for some honest critique. I would like to hear where I may need to improve ect.

 

[Frequency]

Welcome

It has a story

So i like it

 

[andymac1981]

Thanks.

 

[KenC]

I like the point of view and the lighting, but those bright spots in the background are distracting. You should experiment with cloning or darkening them so the leaf is brighter than they are. Also consider cropping a little on the bottom and straightening it - it appears to have a little bit of a tilt.

 

[andymac1981]

Thanks for the feedback Ken I appreciate it.

 

[MLeeK]

I'd REALLY like it without that sign lit up in the background. It's a HEAVY draw on the eye.

 

[andymac1981]

I'd REALLY like it without that sign lit up in the background. It's a HEAVY draw on the eye.

It took me a while to master but some post processing and this is what I have.

 

[Frequency]

Yes, now there is more focus on the subject