I know what you mean, and the feeling is definitely there. I like the shadows, it's dark but legible, and the contrast is definitely a plus as there is a sense of layers to the image, the eyes having to readjust to each piece. I think the brights are a bit too bright tho, maybe tone it down a bit?
yes your right. the pillow on the left is mucho bright. unfortunately it turns pur grey when you darken it up, there's no detail just white. ah well, next time