“The Lost Art Of Solitude…”

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  1. enezdez

    enezdez TPF Supporters Supporting Member

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    D850
    f/5
    ISO 100
    1/400 Sec.
    24 - 70 mm - f/2.8G
    24 mm

    Incandescent Light & Rapid Westcott Kit 26" Octa Softbox OCF Right SB 700, Using Phottix/Odin II System

    (Processed In LR & Color Efex Pro 4)

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    Thanks For Looking Any Comments/Criticism Will Be Appreciated.


    Enezdez


     
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  2. tirediron

    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Nicely done; I would like to see the lamp looking like it was actually throwing light on the scene...
     
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    enezdez TPF Supporters Supporting Member

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    Thanks!
     
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    Derrel Mr. Rain Cloud

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    I'm not fond of the way the hand is as large as his entire head...that 24mm focal length is just not helping this shot, in my opinion.
     
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  5. enezdez

    enezdez TPF Supporters Supporting Member

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    I see your point, but there were issues with the room/space (really it's just an enclosed porch) I did not foresee & I was forced to to use 24mm or just tear down the setup & have an epic failure (not really; however, it would of been disappointing)...next time I will try it in a different room - thanks for the input!!!

    Cheers,

    Enezdez
     
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    ceemac No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I like the darkness in the scene. But tirediron has a point. You should use the lamp to throw light on the paper you're trying to read in the dark. (sorry I sound like my mother)
     
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