The Painter's Dreame

[Vaske_Obsidiann]

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[pgriz]

Beautiful woman, and excellent lighting as always, Aleksandar, but your cutting her head off at the forehead, reduces the attractiveness of the image. Her eyes immediately catch mine, and the upper edge of the frame is almost painfully close.

 

[PinkDoor]

Could have been great. . . .not enough head and too much scarf. Love the colors though!

 

[sm4him]

Beautiful woman, and excellent lighting as always, Aleksandar, but your cutting her head off at the forehead, reduces the attractiveness of the image. Her eyes immediately catch mine, and the upper edge of the frame is almost painfully close.

^This. It's a beautifully sharp, well-exposed image, and her eyes are so striking. But it pulls my eye straight to the cut-off head and feels incomplete, especially when there is so much "dead" space at the bottom. Seeing that much of the pink fabric covering her just doesn't do nearly as much for the image as seeing the rest of her head would have.
But that's just my 1¢ worth (I'm too broke right now to offer 2¢ worth )

 

[cgipson1]

I almost love it... if you had moved her face down just a bit... with more scarf / cloth on top, it would have been lovely! Did you shoot it this way or crop it this way? As mentioned... cutting off heads is never a good idea. A closer shot of her face (same style, just closer) would be nice too (minus the chopping)!

 

[Montanamyst]

I love the exposure and the sharpness. But like the others said, not loving that much curtain or scarf. It might have been better to show part of her shoulder or something. But technically its Great!

 

[cayto]

Understand what was the objective of this framing, but, the face is awesome, and love her eyes, so i think if i the face was down a little bit, you still show the colors and the pink pattern but gives the right emphasis to her face!

Still a nice shot

 

[Jaemie]

Could have been great. . . .not enough head and too much scarf. Love the colors though!

Exactly.

 

[Vaske_Obsidiann]

My dear colleagues,Each style consists of errors!Thank you!

 

[macpro88]

My dear colleagues,Each style consists of errors!Thank you!

+1

I like it, great job here, most people want to focus on the face, a very beautiful face, you try and draw the focus to the scarf and colors. For some it works, for some it don't.

I like it, would like to see one with a full face though

 

[dmalsr22000]

Nice image. If you hadn't broken some rules, your image would have looked like all the rest of them.

 

[Majeed Badizadegan]

I'll chime in that the image is strong enough where it's cropped now. Excellent light, texture study, and beautiful model with striking eyes. It reminds me the famous "A Life Revealed" from National Geographic in 1985. http://www.worldsfamousphotos.com/wp-content/uploads/2007/09/afghan-woman.jpg

 

[Vaske_Obsidiann]

Thank you once more, my choice of my curse...