I like the concept of the picture very much. However, it's slightly OOF, and as others have said a bit noisy.
I don't know a lot about your camera (Nikon) but I did look at your settings during the shot.
Camera
Exposure
Aperture
Focal Length
ISO Speed
I would suggest a couple of things to try for future shots. I'm assuming these were taken outside (not a greenhouse) so daylight should be enough to lower your ISO from 1000 to around 200-400 range.
You are at your longest focal length for the lens (200mm) so try to back off to the 160-180mm range. Usually you don't get the sharpest focus at full zoom.
Change your f/stop from f/9.0 to f/5.6 which should allow you to bump up the speed to 1/1500 or more will 'freeze' up the wing motion. Although when I was at 1/2000 it still didn't stop it! (smaller bee though).
Lastly, the last bunch of shots I took were in manual focus. I've never tried that before, but it worked very, very well. Just find a spot near where the bees are feeding. Focus in on it, and try to anticipate when they are going to fly (very hard!). Snap away.
Good luck. I'd post a picture, but it's your thread so I'll abstain unless you wish to see some shots I've taken.