The Tree

[batmura]

Akcakese, Sile, Istanbul, Turkey (2) by batmura, on Flickr


Akcakese, Sile, Istanbul, Turkey (4) by batmura, on Flickr

 

[Majeed Badizadegan]

I like the rendering of the scene with a long exposure.

The composition feels disjointed-- it's not coming together for me. Maybe crop in from the right until there are no leaves entering right-frame.

 

[batmura]

I like the rendering of the scene with a long exposure.

The composition feels disjointed-- it's not coming together for me. Maybe crop in from the right until there are no leaves entering right-frame.

Thanks, Majeed. Do you think the second edit is any better?

 

[Majeed Badizadegan]

Thanks, Majeed. Do you think the second edit is any better?

I might just come in from the right and see how that looks.