"Time" and "Shaken"

[crawdaddio]

Let me know how you like 'em! (Or hate 'em:blushing
Thanks for browsing.................

Time

Shaken

 

[woodsac]

I like #1, but it seems a little flat?
#2 however, doesn't really give me a focal point?

 

[crawdaddio]

#2 however, doesn't really give me a focal point?

That's why I like it. Thanks

 

[macawlvr]

#2 reminds me of a ghost that's moving quickly!

Trish