todays rubbish

[mr. twin turbo]

some closer-up shots of stuff i found on my journey today.

 

[ernie]

you need (a lot) more dof in most of these shots. you also might want to think more about what exactly it is you want to shoot, a decent composition is lacking in most of these. except the last one i'd say, the vertical lines from the shovel/stairs versus the diagonal stairs is good. maybe next time include more stairs and less rocks, the rubble at the bottom is kinda confusing. might make a good b&w then.

 

[jv17]

well you need to have a concept in your shots and also you need to edit it..

 

[youbetcha1018]

you need (a lot) more dof in most of these shots. you also might want to think more about what exactly it is you want to shoot, a decent composition is lacking in most of these. except the last one i'd say, the vertical lines from the shovel/stairs versus the diagonal stairs is good. maybe next time include more stairs and less rocks, the rubble at the bottom is kinda confusing. might make a good b&w then.

Agreed. The first 5 photos are really confusing. I mean, I don't know where's the subject and what is it that you really want to show us. Actually, I like the 6th photo. The shot of the shovel is more favorable than the 5 photos.