Torched

[thepaulreid]

Hi all, I am quite new here but have survived the customary TPF welcome

Here is a shot I think will fit this forum. My first cloning shot:


Torched by The Paul Reid, on Flickr

Would love to know your thoughts on this shot!?!

Thanks

Paul

 

[Trever1t]

Concept is good...couple of things jump out at me: Lack of droplets on him and the floor is dry. Placement of the gas can, might look more natural if it was off to the right OR if the can was where it is and the shots was viewed through the legs of the person with the match....just a thought

 

[thepaulreid]

Thanks trever. Yeah, I was kicking myself about the dry floor too! Nice idea on the angle, although space was quite limited for this shot; had to pull back the carpet to get to the floorboards, the rest of the room was carpet and furniture.