Truck Apart

[Teknik]

Comments Plz

 

[rabidzoomer]

1st would be to remove the huge name off the top. It is to large so i would relocate it at the bottom in a smaller font. 2nd would be angle. It looks as if you took this while driving down the road. A closer shot and move to the right would look better depending on what is behind it. 3rd, it doesn't look like it is in perfect focus. The rear tire looks to be in the most focus which it would be better to focus on the hood since that is where most of the picture evolves from.

I do like the shading on the top and bottom. It really adds to the picture and makes it less busy.
Just check up on those few things and you would have the perfect picture.

 

[tirediron]

Agree with the above comments except for the shaded bands; not fond of them, however that's a purely personal thing. In addition, the image is seriously under-exposed in the area of the engine/front suspension. Fill light was needed here to bring out some detail.

 

[Teknik]

thanx for the tips and comments