Trying to Make a Business Card.. Thoughts?

[D-B-J]

I like everything but the title... it's hard to read. But any arrangement wouldn't make it work. Thoughts?

Jake

 

[e.rose]

That font is terrible.

Just my opinion. YMMV

 

[D-B-J]

That font is terrible.

Just my opinion. YMMV

Any thoughts on a better font?

 

[e.rose]

That font is terrible.

Just my opinion. YMMV

Any thoughts on a better font?

Something simpler and cleaner. That one is just kinda hokey, no offense.

As my designer friend told me once, "Helvetica and Helvetica Light are your friends."

Doesn't have to be those fonts exactly... but something simpler and cleaner.

 

[SoulfulRecover]

i dont mind the font. My issue is the dark text. Put a white border around the black text so it can be read across all colors. Also dont forget you have the back side of the card to play with.

Quick screen shot of my card:

 

[gsgary]

i dont mind the font. My issue is the dark text. Put a white border around the black text so it can be read across all colors. Also dont forget you have the back side of the card to play with.

Quick screen shot of my card:

Who do you think you are ? James Bond

 

[sscarmack]

Are you a landscapes photographer?

 

[SoulfulRecover]

i dont mind the font. My issue is the dark text. Put a white border around the black text so it can be read across all colors. Also dont forget you have the back side of the card to play with.

Quick screen shot of my card:

Who do you think you are ? James Bond

to most of the world either Tony Stark or Eddard Stark and I have yet to figure out why :er:

 

[D-B-J]

Are you a landscapes photographer?

I do landscapes mostly, but also animal and people photography. That photo on the card sums up what I LOVE about photography.

Jake


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[elizpage]

I just don't like the font or the placement of the text.

 

[D-B-J]

I just don't like the font or the placement of the text.

So what would be a better placement?


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[littlepenguin]

Would you open to posting a copy of your business card image without any font? I may have a suggestion or two.
The font placement isn't the worst, but I do agree with the others that the font should be a bit different. I think a non-serif font would be a better fit.

 

[D-B-J]

Would you open to posting a copy of your business card image without any font? I may have a suggestion or two.
The font placement isn't the worst, but I do agree with the others that the font should be a bit different. I think a non-serif font would be a better fit.

Can do. I'll do that in about twenty minutes.

Jake


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[Derrel]

Maybe if the name were changed to Faintly Peachy-Orange Skies Photography...

 

[D-B-J]

Maybe if the name were changed to Faintly Peachy-Orange Skies Photography...

You saying the photo's no good?