Under the Overpass

[fotomonkey]

 

[Fred Berg]

I would suggest a 1" to 1.2" rotation clockwise would give it a more even appearance. It looks like it is tilting just slightly anti-clockwise as is.

 

[fotomonkey]

Thanks Fred. I think my head was cocked when I was editing.

I've adjusted it a smidge. Hopefully you'll see the change with a refresh.

 

[JustJazzie]

I love the lines on this one, and the black and white suits is perfectly! I see what you were trying to capture.

I think though, that if this were mine, I would crop off the right side of the picture. As it stands, you have strong lines all over the left in darker tones. Then the right side comes along, with its brightness and pulls me away, even though there isn't much to look at over there. Just my very humble 2¢.

 

[fotomonkey]

Thanks JJ. I think I exported the wrong version the last time. Try refreshing and see if that's what you're talking about.

Or do you mean totally cropped?

 

[mmaria]

I like the first version more, but would suggest that you darken a bit the bg on the right, because that's the brightest part of the photo and gets more attention than it deserves

 

[fotomonkey]

Good point. I'll make some adjustments after work.

 

[fotomonkey]

Hopefully the third time's a charm.