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[bribrius]

 

[bribrius]

not much. critique if you like. Kind of wondering if i should have kept the shadows little more to add some definition...

 

[Designer]

There was a picture there even without the man and his drone. Different light would be better though.

With the man and drone, it becomes more about them as the subjects.

 

[Designer]

And just a quick note of general observation; you've got multiple threads with the title "untitled", so now the point of differentiation is the posting date. Why not just name each thread something more individualized?

 

[astroNikon]

I didn't even see the drone (and ignored the person).
I was looking at the contrast of the outside large bricks, and the arch, then the fenced in small bricks.
I'd like to see it without the person and drone.

 

[bribrius]

Thanks guys, i think i have a few of the building. I mostly liked this version because of the person and drone. Guess i found the building itself not as interesting by itself.

 

[bribrius]

I didn't even see the drone (and ignored the person).
I was looking at the contrast of the outside large bricks, and the arch, then the fenced in small bricks.
I'd like to see it without the person and drone.

 

[bribrius]

 

[annamaria]

I agree with the others. My eyes go straight to the building. Like it better without the person.

 

[bribrius]

I agree with the others. My eyes go straight to the building. Like it better without the person.

thanks. very helpful. I have seen the building many times so to me it is just more abstracts etc. of it. Other parties perspectives of course won't be as subjective as mine. Guess i was looking for something more to add to it than just the building.

 

[annamaria]

I agree with the others. My eyes go straight to the building. Like it better without the person.

thanks. very helpful. I have seen the building many times so to me it is just more abstracts etc. of it. Other parties perspectives of course won't be as subjective as mine. Guess i was looking for something more to add to it than just the building.

I totally get what you mean. Sometimes a person or people add to the photo and other times not. In photography not everyone sees the same thing or interprets a shot the same way, that's one of the things I love about photography.

 

[bribrius]

meh... whatever. lol is what it is...