visiting sac. c&c please

[itf]

DSC_0115 by initial tofu, on Flickr


DSC_0132 by initial tofu, on Flickr


DSC_0093 by initial tofu, on Flickr

 

[ChevyBaby]

I've given up critiquing photos today on technical qualities so ill leave that to someone else.

I really like how bright and happy these photos are. If the middle image was shot using a large format camera it would have looked reaaally special, maybe even with a bit of editing to give it an edgy look or maybe a fairytale look.

 

[itf]

thanks! i actually cropped out part of the bottom of the street on the 2nd one and i'm still a newbie at this, so i dont know how to post process much.

 

[starcluster]

I would suggest to be closer in the first image and a little bit in the second one to remove the streets..
and the third one is over exposed ..
keep it up

 

[jamesdavidboro]

I like the 2nd one. Its nicely framed by the trees but as other people have said its too far away. The bottom has some interest because the Giraffe's sticking his tongue out, but the left hand side of his face is disapearing into the overexposed background, shame. You need to upload larger pictures, then someone will edit them for you to show you what can be done.:thumbup:

 

[itf]

i was actually testing crops of the 2nd one and cropping out the streets seemed too tight to me. imo. and the 3rd one was in direct harsh sunlight so maybe thats why the face is underexposed while the bg is overexposed.

thanks for all the replies