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Hmm.

I'm struggling to make something of this. The three logs in the foreground are almost well arranged, I think. They look "natural" without looking random. They do seem to direct the eye to nowhere, which is an unfortunate side effect. I like the curve of the "horizon" line, and I like that it appears to start as sea-shore and end as a fog line.

There are elements here I like, but it's not pulling together to make up an appealing picture, or a picture that particularly tickles my brain in an interesting way.
 

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Dark and gloomy, and therefore fairly interesting to begin with. However, to me it seems unbalanced in an unsatisfying way, with very little on the right side. Cropping to put the rightmost log almost on the frame edge would work better for me.

I agree with Andrew that the three logs direct one to a convergence point where there is nothing, but that seems to fit this image.
 

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