Aside from the time issue, the lighting is a bit off. You've got a nasty highlight on the upper right of the watch crystal that's distracting. Also, I would advise to not use a softbox for this kind of shot. As you can see in the bezel, the edge of the softbox is reflected as a dark gray band under the highlight. Softboxes also tend to create a highlight with no gradient, they just stop. One other niggle is that the position of the light makes it very difficult to read the name of the manufacturer. Sometimes when you're going for a dark watch shot like this you may have to take a second shot for the dial to get the highlights in the dial where they need to be. This way people can see the details in the dial like the watch name, hands, markers, etc.