We went to the beach... It was B&W

Dinardy

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Here are a few recent pictures of my family and sights while I was there.
Just looking for some general criticism/Help with the Black and White Conversions...

Thank you guys and gals.

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DSC_9461 by A.A. Jones Photography, on Flickr

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DSC_9743 by A.A. Jones Photography, on Flickr

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DSC_9306 by A.A. Jones Photography, on Flickr

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DSC_9147 by A.A. Jones Photography, on Flickr

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DSC_7347 by A.A. Jones Photography, on Flickr

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DSC_7314 by A.A. Jones Photography, on Flickr






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1 is nice but would be better without the cars, especially the one at her back.
2 is ok but there's something about it that I can't quite put my finger on. I think its because I'd prefer to see a face or a tighter shot.
3 so close. Don't like the reflection in the lens (photogs right), but it would have been much better if the kid was looking at you too.
4 Nailed it, great shot
5 is ok, a bit snapshotty but a good family pic
6 really nice as well, I like the fog and the repitition in it.

All in all pretty good mate, well done
 

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4&6 for me. the skin seems too muddy in 3.
 

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Crop #4 to an 4x5 ratio losing some of the right side in the process and you'll have an outstanding heirloom image.
 
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1 is nice but would be better without the cars, especially the one at her back.
2 is ok but there's something about it that I can't quite put my finger on. I think its because I'd prefer to see a face or a tighter shot.
3 so close. Don't like the reflection in the lens (photogs right), but it would have been much better if the kid was looking at you too.
4 Nailed it, great shot
5 is ok, a bit snapshotty but a good family pic
6 really nice as well, I like the fog and the repitition in it.

All in all pretty good mate, well done

Thank you very much my man, a very helpful reply indeed

Also, its not fog... its the smoke from a dock fire just across the way :sun:
 
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Crop #4 to an 4x5 ratio losing some of the right side in the process and you'll have an outstanding heirloom image.

Thank you for the advice. That image seems to have received a lot of praise on our facebook. I'm sending the print order out now
 

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