What is this missing? C&C please

[CmazzJK]

I took this picture several weeks ago when the temperature dropped drastically over night and left a really dense fog over the valley I live in. I like the composition of this picture but I cant quite put my finger on why I don't think it's right yet... Any help would be appreciated, thanks.

 

[BGeise]

More detail in the bridge. Looks too simple so your eye looks elsewhere

 

[cynicaster]

Yeah, it's a little dark. Maybe some interest in the foreground would help as well.

 

[Derrel]

A tiny bit of rotation CCW, but not 100% leveled, which looked bad. A bit of digital "fill light" added, a very slight + exposure adjustment, a bit of a contrast increase, and a bit of clarity added.

 

[timor]

A tiny bit of rotation CCW, but not 100% leveled, which looked bad. A bit of digital "fill light" added, a very slight + exposure adjustment, a bit of a contrast increase, and a bit of clarity added.

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This looks much better. :thumbup: Good lesson for me to.

 

[BGeise]

A tiny bit of rotation CCW, but not 100% leveled, which looked bad. A bit of digital "fill light" added, a very slight + exposure adjustment, a bit of a contrast increase, and a bit of clarity added.

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Nice edit darrel i agree with the rotation that really made it better

 

[IzzieK]

It will be nice to have human element added as a bonus...or a train now that Derrel made a good edit of it...

 

[CmazzJK]

A tiny bit of rotation CCW, but not 100% leveled, which looked bad. A bit of digital "fill light" added, a very slight + exposure adjustment, a bit of a contrast increase, and a bit of clarity added.

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I do like that edit derell, good eye, and thanks

 

[CmazzJK]

It will be nice to have human element added as a bonus...or a train now that Derrel made a good edit of it...

I definitely agree that a train would add a lot a serious wow factor considering this is a foot bridge lol

 

[Derrel]

It will be nice to have human element added as a bonus...or a train now that Derrel made a good edit of it...

I definitely agree that a train would add a lot a serious wow factor considering this is a foot bridge lol

It might make a very humorous "selective color" shot if one were to composite in Thomas The Tank Engine, or Percy, or James...that might be kind of amusing to those who have kids, and who are familiar with the Thomas videos!

http://www.google.com/search?q=Thom...-GcnfoAT0toGoDA&ved=0CD4QsAQ&biw=1332&bih=834