Well, first off, I would have bought a Ford....but....then...I know....I know....a Ford is a
[email protected]@@'d Over Rebuilt Dodge, right??? Anyhooo...kidding aside...I thin k the originals are a bit too bright-looking...the edit misstwinklytoes did looks better--it looks more like a nocturne with the brightness level pulled down.
Honestly, my first reaction when I saw the pics was "What should I have done different? Everything."
WB is crazy off. ISO is causing severe noise. The lights in the background are far blown out. The background itself is very distracting. The angles shot are uninteresting to say the least.
But.... I do see a Yamaha sticker in the back window- so it isn't all bad.
Good news, you can only improve from here. Start with some early evening shots using naturally available lighting. This should take some of the difficulty factor out of the shot so you can concentrate on the basics.