Windows of an abandoned warehouse

[myvinyl333]

I am trying to shoot as much as possible to improve my shooting. Yesterday I went went out on an overcast day and located an abandoned warehouse.
Looking for composition in the windows/door posted below.


D800, 24-70, ISO 200, 40 mm f 5.6


D800, 24-70, ISO 200, 45 mm f 10

 

[Mike Lamb]

#1 has promise. I like all of that black. I'd like to see a little more of the bldg.

 

[Jaemie]

All of these are good. Any more? I love industrial decay.

 

[myvinyl333]

#1 has promise. I like all of that black. I'd like to see a little more of the bldg.

The original shot of the windows

 

[myvinyl333]

All of these are good. Any more? I love industrial decay.

 

[TenaciousTins]

I like this kind of stuff too. Nice start to taking pictures...

I noticed your thread in the Beginners forum...good for you for starting back at the basics. There is no shame in that!

I'll take the last picture you just posted for instance...I like the symmetry of it. Now imagine if you'd gotten down on the ground and shot looking up from the middle of that metal piece on the ground? Not saying that would have made a better picture...but my point is, to try different angles with everything....you could be REALLY surprised as to what you come up with! I am no better than you at this kind of photography but I thought I'd throw it out there, to try all sorts of different angles...and play with the depth of field too. Learn how to use your manual settings...those will save you a lot of bad shots.

 

[Frequency]

I like the original full shot, especially the first one among them