I like the shot in fact, it's the type of sleepy, boring shot that I normally take. However, there's something missing and I can't put my finger on it. Probably something about the post-processing, because I find the lines interesting.
In terms of composition (and this is just a personal preference, nothing wrong with your photo): I'd crop some of the top maybe right below the top light, trying not to cut the reflection of the botton light.