Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by ranmyaku, Dec 7, 2007.
that's the thinnest DOF I've ever seen, man...only the center is in focus, and none of the petals are. Cool color, but I would have liked to see more of the flower in sharp focus.
Thanks for the crit!
Personally, I loved the color also. I've never done flower shots before, and a really never thought I would b/c thats not really my thing. Just testing out my 105mm Nikkor micro VR i just got. This was shot handheld..
I like it, the DOF is kinda cool because it makes the pedals soft looking, which can be nice in flower shots.
maybe crop a little off the left? Only reason i say that is because its dark and dull, with all of the brightness on the right side. I dont know, just the left side draws my attention away from the flower
the comp isnt very good. but i do like the color, it seems a tad bit underexposed
sorry you don't like the composition, but I like it myself. It is supposed to be light and dark. Like the flowers are fighting off the darkness.
Let me guess, because it doesn't follow rule of third?
It's very pleasing to my eyes, and black and yellow is a great color combination. It really pops, great job.
That's a very cool shot. Great color and comp.
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