A Little Walkway

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  1. Matty-Bass

    Matty-Bass TPF Noob!

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    Here is a photo I posted yesterday, but with black and white. Crits are really appreciated.

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    I was wondering if the levels seem ok in this one. Too much contrast? Too little? I'm not sure. Crits welcome!
     
  2. JonK

    JonK I want MORE!!

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    I really like the overall shot but the sky is quite overblown. I think you could hold that back so it wouldn't get so blown. Or paint back some of the original sky.
    Great perspective and I like the BW treatment. :)
     
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    Hey Matt,

    You've got some great things going on with this picture, especially the tending to infinity - you've done this well as there's nothing pulling the viewer's eye from the natural (and physical) view path. The composition is a bit toooooo "horizon in the middle" for my taste and as Jon says the sky's a bit blown by your contrast enhancements. You could actually take a letterbox crop to the image and it would be a dramatic take on the same theme.

    Good work though, keep em coming!

    Rob
     
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    I think I see what you mean, the horizon is pretty much in the middle, where the point ends? And a letterbox crop meaning a lot less height but the same width?
     

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