Abstract

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  1. Aimee

    Aimee TPF Noob!

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    I have been experimenting with abstract photos recently, where you zoom in close to an object at an interesting angle, so it isn't as easy to tell what the original object was. This is my first try at making an abstract picture (as I usually take more "traditional" pictures), and would like to know what I could do better next time and what i did right this time.
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    (sorry about the pic before, didn't realise it's size!)
     
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    well, first and formost the picture needs to be smaller so i can get a good look at it without having to scroll up and down and I can get a sense of what it is better. Secondly, the top of the picture seems a little soft. And lastly, a tighter crop would be nice, there is a little too much negative space
     

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