Afternoon swim?

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  1. bquicktronic

    bquicktronic TPF Noob!

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    I shot this with a 8mg digital C480;
    with natural outdoor lighting

    I love this photo, curious what I could do to improve it...
    any suggestions???
    ;)

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    ok I guess you cannot reshoot it :p because I'd do one or two steps back to get her in a water. Because now I was thinking if she is really in water or just stiting on something, and then I noticed that her hands are in water... and I am not a fan of those tones :p
    but I like the composition and that we cannot see her face. this makes rather mystical mood here which is very cool :)
     
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    this pic could be better for me I think if just girl put her hair little aside so her face could see better.Thats is just my opinion
     
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    I love the "molasses" coloring, really gives it a romantic effect. it would be better to see more of her face though
     
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