Another B/W attempt

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  1. Photoboy

    Photoboy TPF Noob!

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    I'm working on enhancing my B/W conversions of color photos. What do you think of this one?



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  2. Tonks

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    Again, with the eyes closed. It's just strange. I commented on the other shot you posted of this couple, and my comments about the pose goes for this one as well.

    Her hair looks a bit better in this one- some of the lighting on her hair is a little harsh, but brunettes are so difficult to photograph.

    I also think I'd like this one a bit better if it were cropped so that I couldn't see her arm/body on the left.
     
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    still don't like the eyes closed
     
  4. Sash[DSL]

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    I wouldnt agree with others I DEFINITELY like the eyes closed. This gives it a very dreamy feel, you could work it further that way if you added a soft focus and slightly higher contrast
     

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