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Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by chiyeung, May 29, 2008.

  1. chiyeung

    chiyeung TPF Noob!

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    I am new so some advice would be appreciated =D





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  2. DadeCountyAnthony

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    I think #3 is a cool shot just that it is a little dark. The other two shots of the city, the buildings look tilted to the side.
     
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    I really like how the green in the trees sticks out in #4.
     
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    I like two a lot. Composition complements the geometry going on in the shot instead of going against it (the edges of the frame don't seem "out of line").

    One looks like the focus is somewhere behind the bike, but the size makes it hard to say for sure. In any case, I would have tried to focus on the bikes' logos as these seem to be the points of interest. If you did this already, then ignore me of course.
     

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