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  1. cactus waltz

    cactus waltz TPF Noob!

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    I like this picture a lot: I took it ouside my house. It's a lightpost reflected in the water. I just feel like something is missing.


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    Composition and texture are very good. I agree it does need a subject, I think just about anything would work situated in the right place on the empy space.
     
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    ditto.
     
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    It is a great shot, but I found myself searching through it for something, not sure what. Interesting textures though.

    Hello fellow Trigger. :D
     
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    That was what I was thinking too. I might just remake the shot but with a rubber duck in it. Or something.
     
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    I didn't see water nor posts, but the right side does look like part of a moon. First I thought, what a camera with such a huge zoom u have?
     
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