August 8th wedding

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  1. CrazyAva

    CrazyAva TPF Noob!

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    I haven't yet begun to edit this wedding, I was just going through it after I loaded it to the computer and really liked a few of them and wanted to get some outside opinions. I like to see what others think because I know that I do not see my work as others do.

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  2. CrazyAva

    CrazyAva TPF Noob!

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    Obviously the first one has been edited because I turned it sepia........other than that I haven't done any editing :lol:
     
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    Christie Photo No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    The shots of the couple are really nice, but I gotta tell ya.... do something else with that first view. I immediately thougt it looked like an mortitian working on a client. Sorry to plant this idea in your mind, but I'm pretty certain others would see it too.

    The couples shots are nice though. I really like the kiss.

    -Pete
     
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    Love the last shot, you've really captured their mood for the day!

    Thanks Pete, now I'm thinking of Six Feet Under when I see that first photo!
     
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    Love the couple shots. I sort of agree about the first one. The eye make up is too dark in BW. Maybe it would be better in color?. I like the image, but I don't think the bride will.
     
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    Well..........I showed her these ones that I posted and when she saw that first one she said "Awesome" :lol: Maybe she likes that sort of dark thing, either that or she didn't see it in that way.........I don't know.

    I can see where you would gather that from the picture.....now that you have me looking at it like that.
     
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    I like the last one the best, very cute, I bet they'll love it
     
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    Bride is hot.
     
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    Nice series.

    First one would be stronger with a bit mopre contrast and sharpening. I like it.
     
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    Love the kiss shot!!

    I don't know that I would have been mortician on the first one either- until it was pointed out. Love the angle!
     
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    Very nice...until someone mentioned morticians I sure didn't see the first shot that way at all. The third photo is very nice, but the angle on it is so funky that IMO it detracts a lot from what would be a very strong photo. I'd also prefer to see the top of her veil.

    Just my $.02 :)
     
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    Love the kiss shot ... a real great one! :mrgreen:
     

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