B&W images

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  1. shaunly

    shaunly TPF Noob!

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    I'm starting to really like the B&W look. It just seems so timeless. What do you guys think... CC please. Thanks!

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  2. tirediron

    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    C&C per req:

    1. Very nice; good use of leading lines in your composition. I would consider cropping a bit more off of the top though, just to alleviate the horizonally centered horizon.

    2. Far too much unused space in this image IMO. This is a subject that doesn't especially lend itself to monochrome conversion.

    3. Nicely done; again, not sure that a monochrome conversion was the best treatment.

    4. Outstanding! This has to be one of the best digital monochromes I've seen on this 'site in a very long time. Perfect contrast, ideal exposure.

    Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.

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  3. shaunly

    shaunly TPF Noob!

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    How's that? I just cropped image #1. I think it's much better. thanks for the advice.
     
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    KmH Helping photographers learn to fish Supporting Member

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    Tirediron covered the bases well.

    #4 is very nice. Crop that sliver of corner off the right side. :thumbup:
     
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    shaunly TPF Noob!

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    Ill give that a try, thanks!

    Only two CC? Maybe I posted this thread in the wrong section. =/
     

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