Beach Photo Shoot C + C

[FieralDS]

Salutations again!

Once again, i was rummaging through some photos of a fun photo shoot i did for my friends and came across another photo i particularly liked. It feels a tad soft to me, and perhaps it could have been a bit crisper (especially around the eyes), but I'm interested in what you all think. I'll be posting more from the Shoot when i get around to cropping them.

-D. J.

P.S. - I realize that the teeth showing is kinda a detracting aspect, but i didn't feel it detracted too much from the shot.

 

[Jankster]

it seems a touch soft to me too. i like the composition tho. she has pretty eyes

 

[midnitejam]

It's soft, but I like it. It has redeeming factors. I would keep it even if it were not the sharpest example I had.

Beautiful model and well posed. Successful compoosition. Consider re-prosessing the original but with selective softening and don't soften the eyes and lips. I like how you captured/processed the eyes, but I think the roundness was lost in processing the left iris.