Big Building!!

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  1. Tyson

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    This is what I did.

    Rule of thirds, water bottom third, building top third.
    I included the water for added interest.
    I used a PL filter and a UV (o) filter.

    What do you think of the Comp and color.would you put it on a magazine cover or post card?

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    ummm..... o.0
     
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    Crop out the branches on the left (distracting). Crop out the grass below the water (distracting). Crop out some of the sky (too much sky).
     
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    post card. color and comp are pretty good, needs a tighter crop though
     
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    longaberger cracks me up...color is fantastic! but i agree, needs a tighter crop.
     
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    I just have to say, that is one awesome building!
     
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    I cant imagine paying so much money for a basket. crazy.
    the building is cool though
     
  8. Tyson

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    How about this, is this better.

    [​IMG]



    Is this a better angle.
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  9. Jeff Canes

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    #2 is better but maybe a little too tight on the left
     
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    It just looks like a snapshot
     
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    I do like the cropped version of the first one you posted. I like the water in it. The building is cool, but overall the photo isn't exactly eye catching.
    It would look good on a postcard, I think.
     
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    That's a resourceful, thoughtful, and helpful critique....

    :grumpy:
     

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