Box C&C

Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by alexanderdel, Oct 19, 2009.

  1. alexanderdel

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    I was just messing around with stuff in my room and took this shot.
    What do you think?

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    It's a neat little image, but it's pretty dark. It might look better if you make the filter on the cigarette the central focal point.
     
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    Good point. That's kinda what I was thinking. The cigarette seems off..
     
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    I think if you'd have focused on the cigarette and added depth to everything else, and maybe closed in the frame more, it might popped better. Otherwise, you just lose the intent of the subject (if there was one intended?).
     
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    There really wasn't a specific object in the box I wanted as a subject. I think I'm gonna re shoot it and get it all in focus..
    Good idea?
     

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