C&C Please. Girl in heavy yellow light. Does it work?

[Kaydub]

Took this of a friend in a parking lot while she was listening to something on an iPod. Lighting is completely from the overhead lamps.

 

[reznap]

No, not working for me.. You can fix it though. It's a nice picture of her other than the white balance.

EDIT:

This is a start, I think. Some people may disagree with me though..

 

[BuS_RiDeR]

I like the edit. It looks more natural. The original is just a bit to much for my taste.

Nice composition though.

 

[nchips1]

If it were blue it'd look better because it's a little less natural, because skin tones are naturally warm, not cool. But I don't think this works and if you wanna do anything other than pure light to the original, I'd make it cooler.