can you help me find it?

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  1. ericmo

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    C&C please
     
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    I got nothing. Of course I never see anything lol. Im sure some of the more expierenced ppl will help ya out. As for me goes...sweet B&W
     
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    Framing... I'd say add in some of the shoreline, take the two subjects out of the center of the frame... what's going on in the sky? Google: Rule of Thirds

    I like this as B&W
     
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    Good as black and white. Don't think it'd have the same effect as a color shot.

    Since you left in the reflection of the land mass behind it, it would've been better to get that in as well.

    There's a bit of "empty space" in the picture. Primarily the surrounding water. I would've cropped it/zoomed in towards them more.
     
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    i see what you guys mean, i appreciate it!!
     
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    i recropped it. is this a better version?? refer to first post
     

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