Chocolate Mob.

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  1. gender bombs

    gender bombs TPF Noob!

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    I was feeling a bit hungry so I decided to take this. The picture to me seems a little crooked, but Id like to see what everyone thinks.



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    Sorry that it's so small, it's supposed to be much larger.
     
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    I think it's a snapshot...and nothing more. I know that's harsh, but I don't understand the point with this at all....try and make us feel the hunger you were feeling...You need to answer the essential questions that Hertz always suggests , what were you try to say with the shot, why did you take it in the first place, what can we learn from this, what did you learn from this...etc. Scrap this and try again. That's my honest brutality, sorry if it offends you.
     
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    I agree with amanda, this looks like your trying to get a shot for Hersheys. I think I might have tried to get a lower angle shot, show the label on one and make them just look HUGE. Thats about the only advice I can think of, nice effort but back to the old drawing board.
     

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