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Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by Deli, Dec 26, 2009.

  1. Deli

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    I recently took these two pics and I really like them. C&C please :)
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    Thanks for looking.
     
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    I like them too! B&W photos are always dramatic looking.
     
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    I think the composition and tone is great. Number 1 my fave - the background is very very good.
     
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    I like both of them, but #2 looks soft
     
  5. Deli

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    Thanks for the C&C


    :)
     
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    I love #2 I was thinking up a story to go with it.. and that is what a picture should do (I think anyways) you caught a great moment.
     
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    I like the feel of #2.... Its a bit soft and my eyes are drawn to the in focus area just behind the woman.

    #1 is has great texture and tone. The lighting is perfect... even a tiny bit of light caught in the man's eyes gives the photo some significant depth. I would have cropped out some of the space above the man's head. This would bring the eye level a little farther away from the center half.

    Good photos..
     
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    I like #1 a lot. I've always said the best pictures are the ones that invoke an emotional response in the viewer and this one succeeds in doing exactly that. Plus, it's sharp and I like the depth of field. My only nitpick (and it's minor) is the chopped off half of his arm.

    #2, I'll just say I'm not personally a fan of the whole tilted camera thing and leave it at that.
     
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    I think both are good shots. I am having a hard time deciding witch one I like best.
     
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    nice work, #2 looks to have some motion blur however
     
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    Nice work Number one have an excellent composition and Drama but I love the number 2 even with the soft look it add a little bit of romance to the photo

    Well Done nice B & W
     
  12. Deli

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    Thanks you for the positive comments :) and I do agree that the 2nd one is a bit soft but it came out good.


    Thanks-Deli
     

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