Down the street in Berlin.

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  1. sincere

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    what should i change about these pics? Maybe sharpen more? SOmething else?

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    is it this bad? geez..
     
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    Both pictures are amazing, great work! The only thing that bugs me is in the first picture that H sign that is on the right side and that little iron bar thing in the bottom left corner...
     
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    It might just be me, but the first shot seems unbalanced. Something with the left side of the building; I think you caught a bit more of it than the right side and for me it tends to make that left building look as though its tipping into the center. I agree also that the sign and that iron bar are a bit distracting.

    On the second shot I find the same problem of 'tipping' with the T-bar. i think if you had tipped the camera a bit to the left, that T-bar would have appeard straight and balanced the photo better.
     
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    you guys, i didnt have a tripod so i had to do it with hands:)
     
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    Just cause you shoot hand held doesn't mean you can't keep a picture straight.

    If anything, fix that stuff in Post..

    I don't like the 2nd picture, Had you not went all HDR on it... It would just be a snapshot. Even with the HDR, I don't like the halo's in it and bits of blotchy highlights.

    The first one needs to be straightened. Its alright.. its just a very busy picture.
     
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    I like these shots, the first one has an eery feel to it, while the second picture reminds me of the STALKER game somehow lol. Nice work :)
     
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    Parkerman: how do i fix it in post? I am not very PS savvy. When i work with PS, i just work, try different things out, without any real knowledge or what i do,lolz..at least it seems that way to me sometimes..
     

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